Saturday, August 29, 2009

Caged ..

A glass wall separates me from my site.
So that the world teasingly dangles in front of me,
Knowing that I can't touch it.
Knowing that I only await waiting to
Waiting for the animal,
clawing fervently underneath my skin
to find an exit,
to find freedom,
but mostly,
you.

9 comments:

Ubaid said...

you really need to socialize larki... your writing is wonderful... and i regret that am the only reader here :(

and you don't read my blog :p

and still no banner :(

~* Dia *~ said...

Thnx ubaid ..
N am really sorry yar..been working like crazy ! N the shifting .. Aah long story :S ido socialize but very few ppl knw abt my blog !
But yea I dnt socailize over the net !
Ikve been 2 ur blog read it n loved it !
The only prob is dis god damn fone :S its not a computer same goes 4 da banner ! :S
Btw send me ur blog add again plz ..

Ubaid said...

awwww, you still using phone to view it, i totally understand yaar.... i hope you get your shifting done soon :)

and which blog link :s

http://beyondthecanvas.blogspot.com

or

http://ricketyarts.blogspot.com

ot

http://ubeee.blogspot.com


which one are you asking for :s

~* Dia *~ said...

Yea sadly still hooked 2 the fone 4 all basic purposes .. Lol
Ghareeb log :P
Thnx 4 understanding :)

Ubaid said...

waisey i am usually online on my phone as well, kya mai bhi ghareeb hua? :p :p

lol, you are welcome gee :)

by the way i LOVEEEE your name!!

Ubaid said...

thanks for viewing my blog, i wrote that thing but the urdu parts are the lyrics!! rest is by me!!

~* Dia *~ said...

Well thnx again .. :)
I luv'd it wat u wrote was really good n the urdu parts add's a bit of desi feel 2 it .. Makin more sense
Well Done ! ;)

Ubaid said...

thank you :)

lol... am better in merging two languages... i prefer writing it raw... giving a more meaning to it... and by the way i don't re read what i write... i just write and post.... so its always raw :$

~* Dia *~ said...

Raw is real my friend ..
I do da same ..
Esp wen am writing 4m a damn fone :p

Keep it Real (: